a few more grammar / whitespace fixes

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Roger Dingledine 2023-02-08 13:20:01 -05:00
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service. No keypair is ever used with more than one introduction
point. (previously called a "service key" in rend-spec.txt)
KP_hs_ipt_sid, KS_hs_ipt_sid
("hidden service introduction point session id").
("hidden service introduction point session id").
Introduction point encryption key -- A short-term encryption
keypair used when establishing connections via an introduction
point. Plays a role analogous to Tor nodes' onion keys. The service
makes a fresh keypair is made for each introduction point.
makes a fresh keypair for each introduction point.
KP_hss_ntor, KS_hss_ntor.
Ephemeral descriptor encryption key -- A short-lived encryption
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* the daily subcredential,
* the hidden service directories' public keys,
* a shared random value that changes in each time period,
shared_random_value.
shared_random_value.
* a set of network-wide networkstatus consensus parameters.
(Consensus parameters are integer values voted on by authorities
and published in the consensus documents, described in