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Tor prevents anyone from learning your location or browsing habits.
Tor works for web browsers, instant messaging clients, remote logins, and more.
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Tor is Open Source, so it’s absolutely free, guaranteed.
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Tor is free and open source software.
Anonymity Online
Protect your privacy. Defend yourself against network surveillance and traffic analysis.
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What is Tor?
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Here, you should put an introductory paragraph about the scary things on the web (like how everything you do can be tracked and recorded, or some human rights violations regarding web searches, etc.) what Tor is, what it does, what the Tor mission is, and why you need it. This should be concise and to-the-point. Direct language is a good thing. If they want to learn more about Tor, they can click the continuation link below. Learn more about Tor »
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Tor is free software and an open network that helps you defend against a form of network surveillance that threatens personal freedom and privacy, confidential business activities and relationships, and state security known as traffic analysis Learn more about Tor »
Why Anonymity Matters
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This is where you can tell your users why they should care about Tor. You can put a concise blurb about your promise and mission. This is reassuring to people who may be on the edge about whether or not to use your product. It will also help spur people on to make a donation, run a relay, or otherwise help your cause. Super cool stuff. Write something catchy and honest-sounding. Get involved with Tor »
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Tor protects you by bouncing your communications around a distributed network of relays run by volunteers all around the world: it prevents somebody watching your Internet connection from learning what sites you visit, and it prevents the sites you visit from learning your physical location. Tor works with many of your existing applications, including web browsers, instant messaging clients, remote login, and other applications based on the TCP protocol. Get involved with Tor »
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Tor Check is a site where one can find out whether or not their web browser is using Tor successfully.
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Who Uses Tor?
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Family & Friends
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People like you and your family use Tor to protect themselves, their children, and their dignity while using the Internet.
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Human Rights Activists
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Activists use Tor to anonymously report abuses from danger zones. Whistleblowers use Tor to safely report on corruption.
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Media
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Journalists and the Media use Tor to protect their research and sources online.
Military
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Miltaries and Law Enforcement use Tor to protect their communications, investigations, and intelligence gathering online.
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Tor prevents anyone from learning your location or browsing habits.
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Anonymity Online
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Announcements
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May 05
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The Tor Project has launched a roadmap for dramatically improving the performance of the public Tor network over the next year. Read the press release »
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Apr 27
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Tor 0.2.1.24 released as stable. Fixes compatibility with recent Apple OSX openssl changes and adds some performance enhancements. Read the full list of changes »